Sunday, April 30, 2017

we eat social media for breakfast

Many authors create relatable stories in order to make the reader feel more engaged and connected. In order to do this, the author uses diction, syntax, tone and rhetorical strategies to develop the atmosphere that is his argument in the story. In this essay, the author does a great job in using all the aforementioned strategies and using personal thoughts and experiences, like texting his breakfast and sharing sentimental moments, to get through to the reader.

The diction and syntax in this essay isn't very formal or sophisticated, which made it easy for the reader to follow along and understand. The author uses the vocabulary or "slang" that the audience understands and gets their attention. For example phrases like, "I'm a wannabe millennial!" or "whipped out my iPhone and started snapping pics" are easy to comprehend and can be found relatable to the audience. Along with being relatable, these phrases and many of the author's sentences and paragraphs are short in length, which make it easier and more compelling for the reader to continue reading.

The author uses humor and rhetorical strategies like heartfelt moments to set the tone of the story. In the beginning, he humorously talks about how he became what he had always made fun of. Towards the end, he explains an emotional moment involving missing a special person. Both of these situations can surely hit close to home for many readers. At these points, the reader feels close and connected with the author and is intrigued to continue reading the essay.

In conclusion, in order to engage the reader, one must know how to properly use diction, syntax, tone, and rhetorical strategies as the author of the essay did. The author connected with the reader and helped understand how technology is changing, how one can benefit from it, and why he texted pictures of his breakfast.

Thursday, April 27, 2017

AP 1991 Q3

Ecclesiastes 1:18, "For in much wisdom is much grief, and increase of knowledge is increase of sorrow." Knowledge is power and with power comes a variation of emotions. Ecclesiastes states it brings nothing but sorrow, but plenty can argue it brings nothing but joy. Knowledge does indeed, come with loads of happiness.

Solomon argues knowledge only only brings grief in the book of Ecclesiastes. However, the book of Proverbs states, "Happy is the man who finds wisdom, and gains understanding." I agree that with more wisdom, you find more happiness. Just like when you're healthier, you become happier. Being wise is just being healthy in your mind. When you carry more knowledge, you feel more confident and ready to take on the world.

Some believe choosing to ignore facts will avoid and prevent despair. For example, Daisy, from The Great Gatsby, is not only playing a fool herself, but also hopes her daughter becomes a fool in the world. Being a fool is her way of coping and she believes it brings her happiness. unhappy people believe that the less you know, the less you can be wounded. People fear the hurtful truth.

Being knowledgeable brings many advantages. For example, you won't feel empty-headed in a room full of other people. You'll see things differently and make better decisions. You'll know well enough to make the same mistakes as other people. The more you know, the happier you'll be.